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A 3 minute poem challenge on skype.

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Twas the darkest of nights,
The coldest air in years ,
We were in another one of our fights,
another argument over our fears,
Could it be.

The to and fro dragged on,
soon she was gone,
the room was now hollow,
the atmosphere mellow,
could it be.

Started with an average talk,
it escalated into a fray,
I should have just taken a walk,
she would still be here today,
could it be.
I woke up today and someone who loves to exchange poems with me writes an amazing piece of work and says, "I bet you can't do that in under ten minutes" So I write this up in three. His is by far more well thought out but I just woke up from a nap so I still found it fun. I enjoy rhymes so this was a joy from me I am aware my skill is amateur at best. Still it was good times meeting his test.
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